Thanks so much, lin212. It seems like I've read a lot of good ML fanfiction, and it does make me wonder a bit just what those season 5 writers were thinking...I mean if the fans generally agree how things should have gone (bottom line: M&D should've gotten back together, at some point, whether early in the season or at the very end), then why not take things in that direction?
Of course, as the famous "bumper sticker" (!) says: "Judge not lest ye be judged." I guess if I love this show, I have to accept it, 5th season and all...but that doesn't mean I can't make some different choices, in my head!
"I don't want you losing any more sleep over me." "Believe me, if and when I ever find myself 'over' you, the last thing I'll be thinking about is sleeping."
It is amazing to think that since the show ended so badly yet we still love it so, well it's because the first 3 seasons are tops of all tv so you gotta love it right! But if the show ended happily maybe we wouldnt all be here talking about Fan fiction stories making it right AHHH the power of Fan fiction!
Post by haddie mayes on Oct 22, 2008 13:12:31 GMT -5
It`s sooo wonderful to have some new fan-fiction to read,the excitement and the thrill of a new story . It reminds me of when we would all be waiting with baited breath for new episodes . And just like the show this new fan- fiction story most definitely does not disappoint. . To me the true sign of good fan - fiction is that when your `e reading you can actually visualise the story as an episode in your head and David and Maddies characters come to life and jump out of the page/screen at you. These stories are just works of art . I absolutely love reading them. It just goes to show what can be done with the right magic and some great imagination .
[shadow=red,left,300][/shadow]OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M WEEPING TEARS OF JOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jpen!!! I already knew you're an unbelievably good writer..... But this!!! I'm speechless!!!!!!!!!!! Well, not exactly speechless.....
My heart is pounding, I'm quivering with excitement, holding my breath.... Shall I continue? All this to tell you: [glow=yellow,2,300]Your story is a shining star in the ML fanfic firmament .[/glow]
This is my full review (I'm gonna post a short one at fanfiction.net).... WARNING WARNING! SPOILERS BELOW!!! Stop here if you haven't read jpen's story!! BTW....What are you waiting for?? GO NOW!!! ;D
1- I LOVE the background music you picked. Fortunately, I was able to find out each song here and there and listen to them while I was reading the scenes... Just a word: MAGIC.
2- David in a black tux....The mind reels.....
3- Julia Dwyer....a compulsive gambler. I knew it, I knew it!! Ever since I saw her, I suspected she'd have a vice of some sort...
4- Scene 8 = My heart stops beating, my eyes well up with tears.... David and Maddie together...in Chicago...... The events of "Tracks of My Tears" never took place ...... Thank you, jpen.
5- Club Lago..... Italian Restaurant, huh? Good choice!!!
6- The chase scene: Yeah!! Finally some action together!!
7- Scene 11: Sweeter than a candy cane....
8- Scene 13-14 = I'm fainting AND sighing AND laughing AND thinking: I'm gonna print this story and put it on my desk so that every time I wish to read some good ML fanfic I have your masterpiece within reach.
Bonus comment: I confess. I had to look up Jimmy Durante on Wikipedia....Shame on me!! His parents were Italian-Americans!
Thank you, jpen.
Last Edit: Dec 4, 2008 20:13:03 GMT -5 by italianbluemooner