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Post by jpen on Jan 10, 2012 17:52:09 GMT -5
I've been wanting to expand my drabble "Of Gifts and Expectations" for a while...finally got a little inspiration. Bees will be lending a helping pen, too--you know what they say, two "pals" are better than one!! ;D Hope you enjoy! www.fanfiction.net/s/7724775/1/Of_Gifts_and_Expectations
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Post by finefinegoodgood on Jan 10, 2012 18:28:47 GMT -5
I've been wanting to expand my drabble "Of Gifts and Expectations" for a while...finally got a little inspiration. Bees will be lending a helping pen, too--you know what they say, two "pals" are better than one!! ;D Hope you enjoy! www.fanfiction.net/s/7724775/1/Of_Gifts_and_Expectationsohhhh....new stuff! I love this. I am going to get so spoiled with all this great new fanfic! But I am soooooo NOT complaining! This is great that you added a new chapter! Those are some hot dreams! Hope to read more soon!
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goldilocks
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You know he is perfect for me...but you and me...we...we..
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Post by goldilocks on Jan 10, 2012 18:38:29 GMT -5
I've been wanting to expand my drabble "Of Gifts and Expectations" for a while...finally got a little inspiration. Bees will be lending a helping pen, too--you know what they say, two "pals" are better than one!! ;D Hope you enjoy! www.fanfiction.net/s/7724775/1/Of_Gifts_and_ExpectationsThis is really a wonderful surprise, Jen! I couldn't believe my eyes first - so glad you decided to continue the story! I know it's going to be a terrific journey! Can't wait to read more, more!
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Post by sandra on Jan 11, 2012 4:04:45 GMT -5
Oh, Jen, I liked this already when it was first published! Isn't it amazing how inspiration works, to hit you after such a long time? I always liked your pre-VM pieces very much (this goes for both of you) and really hope you will continue. Oh, "pals" would surely be part of a season 5 nightmare of David, as "pact" was his season 4 nightmare. Really interested in the solution of this!
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witness
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Post by witness on Jan 13, 2012 1:02:03 GMT -5
Oh sandra, no way I would have missed this...you know I always search for the blue dots (new posts) as well as the 10 most recent! This is a wonderful story and definitely worth the wait. I didn't anticipate that Alex would be having some residual negativity toward David. But when I gave it some serious consideration, it absolutely made sense. He probably felt that paralysis had beset David again; that he feared "responsibility" toward Maddie and their child and therefore, decided not to make an "honest woman" out of her prior to Davey's birth. Of course, Alex was unaware of the Walter-White-Wedding disaster, which was a major plot point factoring into the marriage issue! That being said, one of my favorite parts was when Alex had a chance to experience a private exchange between his daughter and future son-in-law. He was rooting for both of them and finally understood their connection. I love the camaraderie between David and Virginia: they each have their own hot-head to simmer down! It was also wonderful to see Maddie and David rediscovering each other once the Doc gave them the green light: eager, anxious, rife with anticipation and passion. Just as it should be
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Post by sandra on Jan 13, 2012 1:15:42 GMT -5
Awww thanks witness, for pointing out exactly the parts that were important to me. Great that you perceived them exactly the way they were meant and that you let me know -- a really constructive review that is very helpful and very appreciated!!! Oh, and how could I forget the blue dots!
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Post by beesnbears on Jan 24, 2012 18:02:25 GMT -5
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Post by finefinegoodgood on Jan 24, 2012 19:02:09 GMT -5
Ohhhh yippy!!! Looks grrrrreat!!! Cant wait to see what happens! ;D no phone sex....hahaha!!! I bet the wobblies got a few giggles out of hearing that conversation!
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Post by snappysara on Jan 25, 2012 3:53:23 GMT -5
Beesandbears (and jpen?)
I Loved part 3. The writing is exactly like the best of the episodes in S1-3. Just what we needed in S5. A lot of banter, a bit of humour, David being a rogue, Maddie getting...er well mad and a happy ending?? I await with baited breath part 4. Keep writing ladies xxxx Snappy xxx
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goldilocks
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Post by goldilocks on Jan 25, 2012 6:40:33 GMT -5
Oh Jen,Jen, Jen... and oh Bees, Bees,Bees....you girls made my day! I wish you girls wrote season 5 - then it would have been an amazing season to watch! Your descriptions of the characters are perfect! I love how precise and true to life you described Maddie's confusion - bravo! David being nasty in the office - so funny and so him! And there's the banter, sexual tension - something we missed in season 5. So.... what is going to happen now? Can't wait to read!
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Post by diane on Jan 25, 2012 8:08:40 GMT -5
Jen and Bees,
I just love this! Your part 3 is perfection. I could truly expect to see this if I turned on my set to watch a Moonlighting episode. The scene in the office is so perfect, I can see Maddie in all her incensed glory screaming about "no phone sex in the office".
All the elements are there....humor, rage, innuendo, chemistry......and it leaves me longing for more.
Thanks for giving us more Moonlighting..... as it is meant to be!
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Post by jpen on Jan 25, 2012 9:29:27 GMT -5
Snappy, Goldie, and Diane, Thanks so much for your great comments! It's a huge compliment to hear that this feels like "real" ML...I gotta say, even in S5 those writers could come up with some zingers!
We hope you enjoy the next chapter...coming soon! ;D
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Post by beesnbears on Jan 25, 2012 12:33:10 GMT -5
Thanks y'all!! More to come soon!
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Post by bluemoonshampoo on Jan 26, 2012 17:28:12 GMT -5
Oh I haven't read this one yet... I better do a fanfic catch up this weekend and give you some feedback xxx
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Post by jpen on Jan 29, 2012 1:40:05 GMT -5
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