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Post by sandra on Oct 9, 2011 14:21:32 GMT -5
Very nice job, bees!! Ah, those moody hormones and I-am-a-ton qualms... nice to see that our Maddie has them just like everybody else! Oh, and I loved Bert's speech about Agnes... a kite? Very beautiful, Mr. Viola, very beautiful.
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Post by beesnbears on Oct 9, 2011 19:34:06 GMT -5
Thank you, Sandra! I felt bad for Maddie the whole time I wrote this! Thanks for your comments!
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Post by iluvdavid on Oct 9, 2011 19:43:25 GMT -5
Great job beesnbears!!!!!!!
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Post by iluvdavid on Oct 9, 2011 19:45:10 GMT -5
Loved this story!
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Post by finefinegoodgood on Oct 9, 2011 21:34:13 GMT -5
Great job Bees!!! I got the email that this was up this afternoon and it killed me I couldnt read it until tonight!
I have to say I think my phone is trying to give me hints about this baby. Everytime I open the link to VM the screen goes pink! (Clue? Hmmm?)
I just loved this episode! I am going to save my comments until I read it again - then I'll go and post over on the VM boards. But just know that I think it is great great!!! I had the same shoe problem Maddie has going on now! Thank goodness I could get away with wearing no heals and shoes with no backs! LOL! I feel your pain Maddie...I feel your pain!
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Post by beesnbears on Oct 10, 2011 8:26:35 GMT -5
Thanks everyone for reading and your comments. It was fun to write and the team at VM thanks you!
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Post by rose35 on Oct 10, 2011 19:29:24 GMT -5
Oh another cute and fun and oh funny chapter! Poor David the things he get into! HANDCUFFS! LOL And poor Maddie she's feeling those end of pregnancy homones now real bad! How will she get through next 2 months!Oh How will poor David get through the next 2 months too LOL Can't wait to see what crazy case comes their way next LOL
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Post by goldilocks on Oct 12, 2011 5:52:50 GMT -5
Finally I've managed to read the new episodes of VM season 10! And Boy I loved them so much! Diane: it is such a great story, the name adventure is just amazing! It is such a great idea! And I am so curious about the name - yes I am! Bees: I just admire the way you wrote David in this one - he is so attentive, so tender, so loving... I re-read the last scene over and over again! Thank you ladies for the great start, I just can't wait to read more, more, more
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Post by bluemoonshampoo on Oct 12, 2011 8:30:27 GMT -5
Hey Hey Bees - sorry I'm so late to comment. I did actually read the episode on the day it came out and then got terribly up to my neck in work! So here I am at last. Thanks for a lovely story - you're right Goldie, David is so sweet in this one you just want to cover him in bubble wrap and label him: 'handle with care'. Poor Maddie - your descriptions were so realistic of how she feels right now, I could put myself right in to her slightly stretched pumps :-). Can't wait for the birth! I want it to be a girl haha - just sayin' xxx
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Post by goldilocks on Oct 12, 2011 10:06:51 GMT -5
Can't wait for the birth! I want it to be a girl haha - just sayin' xxx This is so funny because just today I mentioned in my pm to Sandra that I'd love it to be a girl! You and me Nancy - we think alike ;D
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Post by finefinegoodgood on Oct 12, 2011 12:36:58 GMT -5
Can't wait for the birth! I want it to be a girl haha - just sayin' xxx This is so funny because just today I mentioned in my pm to Sandra that I'd love it to be a girl! You and me Nancy - we think alike ;D LOL...i said the same thing! I would love to see it be a girl as well. I said before my phone is giving me vibes that it is a girl...everytime I go to VM the screen flashes pink! LOL! I CAN'T WAIT!!! LOL!!!
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Post by diane on Oct 12, 2011 21:07:30 GMT -5
Well, I have always considered cash, liquor, and Amazon gift cards as very acceptable tokens of bribery. ;D
But seriously folks, the fix is already in. We made the decision months ago when we did our full season plan for Virtual 10.
Thanks for caring enough to try to sway the outcome! Not too much longer.....and we'll all know....David and Maddie included!
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Post by jpen on Oct 12, 2011 23:27:45 GMT -5
bees, Another outstanding adventure for our dynamic duo. Excellent job portraying Maddie's third-trimester blues, and loved the topicality of the case (I can just picture the funny hats!). Agnes writing the Original Nine's rhymes was a stroke of genius too.
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Post by diane on Oct 23, 2011 20:52:00 GMT -5
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Post by diane on Oct 30, 2011 18:30:33 GMT -5
Hi all! The latest episode of Virtual Moonlighting -- Season 10, Episode 3 -- is now posted at www.VirtualMoonlighting.comWake up and smell the coffee...David will sure need it as impending fatherhood looms!
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