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Post by iluvdavid on Oct 23, 2011 15:15:18 GMT -5
Blake: "OK Now, I am confused. First of all I met you before Mr. Addison when you came to my house about the disc the last time. And Hope is, was my WIFE"s lawyer!" he sounds angry and frustrated " What kind of detectives are you two?" David: (looking into camera) "With all these dream sequences I am a little confused to what is real and not real..How bout you?" Maddie: (elbowing David) :"Sorry Blake just a little confusion. We are still seeking your disc and now we are also looking into the murder of Hope Saunders!" Blake: "I know nothing about her murder. I never even met the woman but I think she stole the disc and now that she is dead I may never retrieve it!" David: "Where is your wife? We would like to speak with her. Maybe she knows where the disc is." AS the words leave David's mouth a pretty woman comes up behind Blake. Pretty Woman: "I am Blake's wife. My name is JOY. May I help you?"" David (whispering to Maddie) "Joy? Hope? Where's Charity...the plot thickens."
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Post by beesnbears on Oct 25, 2011 18:33:35 GMT -5
A teenaged girl follows Joy into the room. She sports black fish net hose, a black mini skirt and a red tube top. Black leather boots are laced to her knees. Her hair is black as well, sprayed with an entire can of hairspray to hold the manic tease job. Her pink bubblegum bubble explodes across her lips....okay...you get the idea...
Joy: And this is Charity, our daughter.
David: Oh, joy!
Maddie rolls her eyes at David.
Joy: Yes?
David: No I mean ...uh
Maddie: (under her breathe) Oh boy...
David: Yes, oh boy!
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Post by snappysara on Oct 26, 2011 15:08:27 GMT -5
Blake takes Maddie and David into a room with shelves full of books. David 'Look, Is there anything you can tell us about Hope that we don't already know' Blake 'I have told you everything, my relationship with her was strictly PROFESSIONAL. My wife may be able to tell you more..'' At that moment the door opens and Joy beckons David and Maddie into a smaller room. She points to a door at the back of the room. 'Let's go in there and talk..'. David opens the door and says 'After you Miss Hayes' They both enter and the door is quickly shut and locked behind them. 'Oh boy, says David - I didn't see that one coming' They are in a dark cupboard. 'Well DO something' says Maddie 'And what prey tell would you like me to do, I can't see anything......but that feels good' Maddie 'David Don't you dare turn this into an opportunity ....' Just then they hear another man's voice in the room....
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Post by iluvdavid on Oct 28, 2011 18:17:52 GMT -5
"Hello is anyone there" David calls out "Did you hear that Maddie?" Maddie (slowly) "Yes, I heard a man's voice"Maddie moves closer to David "I don't like this Addison." A man's voice: "Hello who are you? I am tied up here. Help please!" David and Maddie move as one toward the voice. Maddie is stuck to David like glue and despite the circumstances neither can help enjoying the closeness. Maddie: "Who are you? And what are YOU doing here?" Voice: " My name is John Brown and I am, was, Joy's boyfriend. I didn't know she was married and that crazy kid locked me in here. Really they all are crazy. " David begins to untie him John continues explaining "Kinda like the family in "The Texas Chainsaw Massacre with better clothes and furnishings and without the chainsaw!" David: "How long have you been here?" John: "Only since this morning. I don't even know if Joy knows I am in here!" David: "Tell us what happened this morning." John: " I came over here to talk to Joy. I am a professional computer programmer I had a disc that she asked me to work on for her and she wanted it back. Said that she didn't need to CHANGE anything on it any longer cause she was getting back together with her husband. When I got here the nutty kid answered the door. She told me that her mom would be with me in a minute and she gave me a drink. Next thing I know I am in here tied up." Maddie: "Do you know what she wanted you to do with the disc?" John: "Sure. She wanted me to doctor the records and the accounts to frame her husband for fraud. I wasn't going to go through with it and that is why I was coming here to return the disc anyway." Maddie: "Charity isn't strong enough to have tied you up and carried you into the closet." At that minute the door swings open. It is Charity: "You'd be surprised at how strong I really am!"
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Post by snappysara on Nov 1, 2011 5:47:03 GMT -5
Charity grabs John and pulls him out of the cupboard and shuts and locks the door again leaving Maddie and David shut in the dark. We hear this muffled conversation:
David: Hey....HEY....Let us out. You think I want to be stuck in the dark with BlondieBlond?
Maddie :Well it isn't exactly oodles of fun for me either....WHAT are you doing...What is that?
David: Don't worry...I think it's time to get Mr Stick Pin out..
Maddie : Just be careful where you are going to stick that pin.
David: Don't tempt me..
Maddie: David this is uncomfortable
David: Don't worry, I'm leaning over you for my own personal pleasure not because I need to
We hear a thud Maddie: Give me that pin and get out of my way
From outside the cupboard we hear the following conversation
Charity: John, put these clothes on for a change and HURRY up!
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Post by iluvdavid on Nov 1, 2011 17:39:51 GMT -5
Inside the cupboard David and Maddie are fighting over the pin which falls out of David's hand into the dark. David: "Good job Maddie!" David falls to his knees and begins to search for the pin. Maddie: "It's your fault!" David: (flabbergasted) "My fault are you nuts?? How are you pinning this on me??" David breaks out in laughter "Get it pinning?" Maddie: (falls to her knees and begins helping David in the search): "Funny Addison..." David: "Ba-bing, I got it!" Maddie: "Hurry!" David: (leans into Maddie and in a sexy voice whispers in her ear): "Wanna get pinned?" Maddie: "David!" David: "Did anyone ever tell you that you are a load of laughs?" He sticks the pin in the door and opens it "Well, they LIED." Maddie gives David a dirty look as they throw open the cupboard door. Charity and John are no longer in the room.
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Post by snappysara on Nov 2, 2011 17:02:22 GMT -5
David grabbing Maddies hand : C'mon be quick on your pins, we need to get as far away from this mad house as possible Maddie : And there I was thinking we were having fun here David: Save your fun for later, I wanna go home Maddie pulling David to a standstill :Listen, we need to find that poor man who was in the cupboard with us and the disk. David: What disk? Maddie : The disk the disk you know what disk David pulls Maddie into a downstairs bathroom and just as they think they are safe charity opens the bathroom door. Charity : You may be able to get out of the cupboard but you wont get out of here She shuts and locks the BATHROOM door. Maddie: Oh boy, David: Wanna hear something funny Maddie: No jokes, please no jokes David: No jokes, I need to pee Maddie Oh boy really? David: No i lied - gottya though From outside the door we hear Maddie: Did not David : Did too (etc)
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Post by beesnbears on Nov 2, 2011 17:57:06 GMT -5
Maddie: Ugh! You are an impossible human being!
She gets as far away from him as she can, sitting on the edge of the bathtub. Her face is flushed with anger and she refuses to look at him.
David: Oh yeah? Well, you would know all about being in impossible! It's impossible to even talk to you these days, much less work with you!
He goes to the door and jiggles the door knob. Angry himself, he pounds the door hard with a fist.
DAvid: Charity?! Open the door! I've got the Queen of Impossibilty squeezing the life out of me and it's time she made someone else miserable besides me!
He pounds again...several times. Maddie covers her face.
David: I swear Charity, open this door!
He replaces the pounding with one running kick. Charity doesn't answer and the door remains locked. Realizing his pounding and kicking was going to do no good, he catches his breath and leans on the bathroom sink.
Dead silence.
David: Unbelievable.
He looks in the mirror and in its reflection sees Maddie wiping tears.
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Post by iluvdavid on Nov 2, 2011 18:14:15 GMT -5
David: (feeling a sudden stab of love for Maddie) "Why are you crying?" Maddie: (turning her back to David) "I am not crying!" David: (gently pulls her around and tilts her face up and wipes the tears with his finger) "Don't. I'm sorry. I didn't mean anything." David sits down next to her and takes her hands in his. Maddie: "You are unbelievable! You yell and scream and say mean things and you think it all goes away cause you say you are SORRY! Well, its not ok! I am tired all we do is fight and hurt each other lately." Maddie brushes his hands away. "I can't take it anymore. Maybe after this case we should just dissolve the business and go our separate ways!" Maddie stands "First , we have to get out of this bathroom!" David: "Do you mean that? Is that what you want?" David feels hurt and angry but a part of him doesn't believe that Maddie wants to go their separate ways anymore than he does. He decides to take a shot. He goes over to Maddie and takes her by the shoulders. "Do you really want that Maddie. I don't. I'd miss you too much." Maddie: (her voice wobbly) "Miss? What is there to miss? Our badgering each other making each other miserable?" David: "Let's just stop and play nice. Maybe if we played with each other a bit more then we wouldn't snap at each other." He pulls Maddie toward him. Maddie: "What are you saying?" David: (leaning in to kiss Maddie) "I'm saying..." David is interrupted as the door crashes open and Blake, Joy and John are standing together outside the bathroom. David: (under his breathe) "Damn!"
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Post by snappysara on Nov 3, 2011 11:04:13 GMT -5
(hahahahaha bees and ILD)
Maddie walks towards all three of them : Excuse us a moment please.... and she slowly shuts the door in their faces. She holds onto the door handle reflecting a second and then turns to face David. Maddie : I'm sorry but What EXACTLY are you saying? David , moving closer : I'm saying that I don't want us to fight all the time... I mean don't get me wrong..I love fighting with you but I'm sure there are much nicer things we could do. Maddie: Oh yeah..Like what? David: Well, firstly we have to solve this case, go outside and speak to this bunch of looneys and then maybe we could find a nice little restaurant with nice soft lighting and music and we could have a nice evening together laughing about all of this and all the other crazy things we have been through together. Maddies expression softens : Well I haven't had anything to eat all day.. David: Thats settled then. He opens the door and says : Yoooohooooooo Miss us?
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Post by iluvdavid on Nov 3, 2011 11:59:28 GMT -5
Blake: " Exactly what are you two doing locked in my bathroom?" Before either David and Maddie can answer Charity bursts into the room wielding a gun Charity: "ok! It was me! Hope Saunders was going to allow my dads secrets to be exposed. That woman was in cohoots with my witch of a mother to ruin my dad! I COULDN'T let that happen!" Joy: (teary) " Why do you hate me so much?" Charity: " You're not my real mom. You just come between me and my dad. I've always hated you. And now you die!" As Charity aims the gun at Joy Blake jumps in front of it as the gun goes off hitting Blake in the leg. He falls down and Charity drops the gun and falls next to him. Scene switches to cops leading Charity out of the house and Blake being put in an ambulance. David: (grabbing Maddies hand) "How bout that dinner? Maddie: " Both of us are a bit grimy. What do you say you go home and change and come over to my house in about an hour? " David gives her a wicked smile. "Sounds like a plan."
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Post by snappysara on Nov 8, 2011 16:51:55 GMT -5
Maddie was in front of her full length mirror and couldn't quite believe the effort she had gone to to choose a dress. It was black and classy and her hair was up. The doorbell RANG.
David stuck his head in the hall : 'Avon calling - with a selection of make-up, perfume, smelling salts...' he stopped open mouthed as Maddie came down the stairs.
David: 'Whoa - must be a pretty hot guy you are taking to dinner' Maddie: 'Well I don't know about hot but he's pretty crazy, I'll give you that' David: 'Does your mother approve?' Maddie: 'She'll never have to know...she pauses seductively......now where on earth are we going and should I bring some bail money?' David: 'Ooooh strike where it hurts, I've changed. We are just going for food in a nice low lit place with jazz music and tablecloths' Maddie: 'Hmmmm if only.....' He sees her into the car and skips round to his side. Turning to the camera - David: 'Keep watching it could be your lucky night'
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Post by iluvdavid on Nov 9, 2011 10:48:43 GMT -5
Maddie was surprised and pleased when they pulled up in front of the hottest restaurant in LA. Maddie: "How did you manage to get reservations here? The wait is usually months long." David: (helping Maddie out of car and handing the keys to the valet) " I keep telling you about my magic powers that come out at night." Maddie grins. "Magic powers huh?" David and Maddie are escorted to their table which is a secluded booth in the back of the restaurant. The booth is shaped like a heart and the seating area is on one side. Maddie and David are enjoying a lavish meal and we see them talking and laughing. David: "It has been a wild 2 years together and I can truthfully say a very happy time in my life." David runs his hand along Maddie's bare arm. Maddie is surprised to find the caresses causing a burst of pleasure in the most intimate parts of her body. She shivers. David: "Are you feeling cold?" David smiles wickedly "I can warm you up." David is surprises as Maddie leans into him for a kiss. He gladly obliges and returns the kiss with fervor. David: "Wow, you just rang my bell!" David leans over for another kiss but pulls back at the last minute."What are we doing here? What is it that you want from me? I know what I want and its more than a few kisses and then we forget about it in the morning. I love you Maddie." Maddie: "I know and I love you too." David: "You know? and how pray tell did you Figure it out?"
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Post by snappysara on Nov 11, 2011 10:48:13 GMT -5
Maddie: Well you have been making lewd suggestions to me since the day we met and I just figured it was your way of showing how much you care... David chuckling : Lewd suggestions hey? I make those to everyone Maddie. What I don't do to everyone is turn to them when I'm in trouble, call them in the middle of the night to see if they are ok, follow them all over town when I am worried about them, chase around trying to get tickets to the symphony, organise birthday surprises, spy on their father for them, miss them when I have to go away somewhere and want to kiss them and hold them in my arms everytime they shout at me or slam a door in my face. That's what sets you apart from everyone else Maddie. I just want to be with you all the time. Maddie (SCREWING up her face) All the time? David: All the time Maddie: Where's the punchline? David: No punch line. Am being straight as a di, heart on my sleeve, honesty before integrity, Maddie you know that I'm crazy about you. The question is how do you really feel about me? Maddie: Well........Pauses and thinks hard
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Post by iluvdavid on Nov 11, 2011 15:56:19 GMT -5
David: (clearly irritated) "and if you have to take so much time to answer that question I guess I have my answer."(David goes to stand up) Maddie: (pulling David back down by his sleeve) "David I was just trying to put my feelings into words? Why so impatient? I just told you that I loved you! You are the most irritating man I have ever met. You drive me completely crazy" David looks hurt and angry and again tries to leave. Maddie continues"Sometimes I loathe the sight of you and have to stop myself from choking you...and other times I have to hold myself back from throwing my arms around you and never letting you out of my sight! I love the way you tease me, I love the way you worry about me, I love the way to try to look after me..I even love you when you drive me crazy! I can't imagine not having you in my life.How's that?" Maddie smiles at David and inches closer to him. David returns her smile" You ain't screwing with my head are you?" Maddie: "Its not your head that I want to screw.." David laughs uproariously "MADDIE HAYES, you HUSSY!" David leans over and begins nibbling on her neck and ear "Your wish is my demand. What do you say we get out of here?"
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