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Post by marple on Oct 11, 2008 17:49:24 GMT -5
Thank you so much for your great-great story, Jpen! I really enjoyed reading it. And looking foward to reading more!
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Post by jpen on Oct 11, 2008 22:56:38 GMT -5
Thanks, Marple!
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Post by beesnbears on Oct 20, 2008 18:45:07 GMT -5
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Post by rose35 on Oct 20, 2008 22:44:21 GMT -5
YAY to new F/F! It was another great story! FUN and flirty and all that great stuff M/D are known for! Thanks for sharing again your story of what if ? I hope to read more from you again HINT HINT LOL
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Post by lin212 on Oct 21, 2008 10:57:03 GMT -5
jpen - this FF story is so fantastic. I gobbled up every word. It makes the Season 5 debacle even more glaring - why couldn't those writers get it right??!!
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Post by jpen on Oct 21, 2008 15:40:52 GMT -5
Thanks so much, lin212. It seems like I've read a lot of good ML fanfiction, and it does make me wonder a bit just what those season 5 writers were thinking...I mean if the fans generally agree how things should have gone (bottom line: M&D should've gotten back together, at some point, whether early in the season or at the very end), then why not take things in that direction? Of course, as the famous "bumper sticker" (!) says: "Judge not lest ye be judged." I guess if I love this show, I have to accept it, 5th season and all...but that doesn't mean I can't make some different choices, in my head!
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Post by rose35 on Oct 21, 2008 23:17:52 GMT -5
It is amazing to think that since the show ended so badly yet we still love it so, well it's because the first 3 seasons are tops of all tv so you gotta love it right! But if the show ended happily maybe we wouldnt all be here talking about Fan fiction stories making it right AHHH the power of Fan fiction!
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Post by haddie mayes on Oct 22, 2008 13:12:31 GMT -5
It`s sooo wonderful to have some new fan-fiction to read,the excitement and the thrill of a new story . It reminds me of when we would all be waiting with baited breath for new episodes . And just like the show this new fan- fiction story most definitely does not disappoint. . To me the true sign of good fan - fiction is that when your `e reading you can actually visualise the story as an episode in your head and David and Maddies characters come to life and jump out of the page/screen at you. These stories are just works of art . I absolutely love reading them. It just goes to show what can be done with the right magic and some great imagination .
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Post by beesnbears on Nov 9, 2008 22:44:52 GMT -5
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Post by rose35 on Nov 10, 2008 11:38:00 GMT -5
Oh YAY for new F/F! I thought it was great and cant wait to see where we are headed with this new direction! I finally registered too to leave my reviews for my dear fellow ML F/F writers too!
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Post by beesnbears on Dec 3, 2008 19:01:46 GMT -5
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Post by rose35 on Dec 3, 2008 23:22:19 GMT -5
Yes i was happy to see new F/F! Ok so who is going to takcle some more, rewrite WGC? LOL Heck write anything on ML and we are happy!
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Post by lin212 on Dec 4, 2008 6:12:06 GMT -5
Loved it, jpen! It was like putting salve on an open wound after re-watching WGC. Thanks, I needed that!
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Post by italianbluemooner on Dec 4, 2008 19:37:36 GMT -5
[shadow=red,left,300][/shadow]OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M WEEPING TEARS OF JOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jpen!!! I already knew you're an unbelievably good writer..... But this!!! I'm speechless!!!!!!!!!!! Well, not exactly speechless..... My heart is pounding, I'm quivering with excitement, holding my breath.... Shall I continue? All this to tell you: [glow=yellow,2,300]Your story is a shining star in the ML fanfic firmament .[/glow] This is my full review (I'm gonna post a short one at fanfiction.net).... WARNING WARNING! SPOILERS BELOW!!!Stop here if you haven't read jpen's story!! BTW....What are you waiting for?? GO NOW!!! ;D 1- I LOVE the background music you picked. Fortunately, I was able to find out each song here and there and listen to them while I was reading the scenes... Just a word: MAGIC. 2- David in a black tux....The mind reels..... 3- Julia Dwyer....a compulsive gambler. I knew it, I knew it!! Ever since I saw her, I suspected she'd have a vice of some sort... 4- Scene 8 = My heart stops beating, my eyes well up with tears.... David and Maddie together...in Chicago...... The events of "Tracks of My Tears" never took place ...... Thank you, jpen. 5- Club Lago..... Italian Restaurant, huh? Good choice!!! 6- The chase scene: Yeah!! Finally some action together!! 7- Scene 11: Sweeter than a candy cane.... 8- Scene 13-14 = I'm fainting AND sighing AND laughing AND thinking: I'm gonna print this story and put it on my desk so that every time I wish to read some good ML fanfic I have your masterpiece within reach. Bonus comment: I confess. I had to look up Jimmy Durante on Wikipedia....Shame on me!! His parents were Italian-Americans! Thank you, jpen.
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Post by beesnbears on Dec 22, 2008 15:03:58 GMT -5
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