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Post by bluemoongirl on Aug 10, 2005 22:21:39 GMT -5
Some of us were discussing the "what if" scenarios in the Portrait of Maddie section....
I just wanted to revisit that conversation here...
I was checking the episode guide on this site against my tapes. And to my amazement, I have all the originally aired eps. Personal Woohoo!
But back to a "what if" scenario....I had mentioned, as an example, that if Cyb hadn't gotten pregnant at the time The Big Bang happened that things may have been different. And according to the air dates, they definately were unaware that she was pregnant when they began producing those eps. So....it was definately where they had intended to go with the characters at the time. But man...the mind reels with what the following season, and for that matter the rest of the series could have been. Oh, and here's another thought...they knew she was pregnant by I'm Curious Maddie. So, would the season have ended with Maddie wanting to make a pact, and then running off to Chicago later?? I'm inclined to say no. It was the beginning of her impending departure from the show for awhile.
So maybe, if anyone would like to expend brain matter on this....we could have fun concocting what would have happened....kind of rewrite history. Anyone???
~blue moon girl
(trying to keep myself occupied until the next dvd release) ;D
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Post by gypsygem81 on Aug 11, 2005 5:32:58 GMT -5
Oooh, this sounds like fun! Well, I agree with you, I don't think they would have had Maddie go off to Chicago if it weren't for Cybill's pregnancy, I think that was written in to give her time off to have the baby. So how about we start with Maddie not going to Chicago at the end of A Trip To The Moon? What would have happened the morning after the night before the laundrmat?
Love Gem
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Post by Stephanie on Aug 11, 2005 9:46:15 GMT -5
uh, the last sentence made me confuzzled, which night are we talking about?  |
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Post by gypsygem81 on Aug 11, 2005 14:21:12 GMT -5
Sorry Steph, I wrote that wrong. I meant the night after the night at their 'date' at the laundermat - in other words, what would have happened after A Trip To The Moon had Maddie not gone to Chicago.
Love Gem
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Post by bluemoongirl on Aug 13, 2005 0:12:07 GMT -5
I've got a couple of ideas brewing....some funny scenes have come to mind....I'll post soon.  ~blue moon girl |
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Post by ryangie97 on Aug 13, 2005 13:23:39 GMT -5
Great blue moon girl. I look forward to reading them.
Angie
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Post by bluemoongirl on Aug 15, 2005 23:22:31 GMT -5
Well, here's one of the scenes that I've been knockin' around...There is some dialogue. And I've tried to keep it pg-13 for the forum. There's only one inuendo - from who else. Don't worry it's not bad. It's hard to convey what's in my head without a lot of dialogue. But just try to keep the characters in mind as they were in the first couple of seasons. David and Maddie are allready married, and they've had a baby...a boy - a year old. I think I'll call him Daniel Alexander Addison.
One morning, Maddie wakes up and realizes that she's slept through the alarm. David turned it off to let her sleep. There's a note on his pillow saying that he's taken Daniel to work because the nanny left a message that she's sick today. Maddie smiles, and looks at their family portrait across the room. It's not your typical family portrait, David is hamming it up in his usual fashion. She smirks....
cut to: Elevator doors open, Maddie's pumps go walking down the hallway to Blue Moon. She enters, and says her usual hello to Ms. Dipesto - who's actually Mrs. Viola, but still goes by Dipesto in the office. All the women are in the office, but the men are absent.
Maddie turns to Agnes who points at David's office door and just rolls her eyes. Maddie looks at her and says "Again!" She opens the door to find all the men gathered around the desk, hooping and hollerin' about something. Maddie strides over, saying, "David, what is going on in here?! Where is Daniel?!" Oops!! They've been caught again. The men move away from the desk to see David sitting there, with Daniel on his knee. Daniel has on his daddies "xray specs" and is pointing to a magazine in front of them on the desk. Maddie yells at David about corrupting their son while the employees scurry out of the office.
David: "Maddie, Maddie, Maddie, honey. It's not what you think!" We were just - looking for Waldo."
Maddie: "In the Sears catalog women's section!!" David, I'm ashamed of you. Corrupting our son. He's only a year old!"
David: "I wasn't corrupting him. I was - teaching him - the finer points of - being a girl watcher."
Maddie goes around the desk, takes the "xray specs" off of her sons face, picks him up and says, "Daniel, your father is encouragable!" (kisses Daniel) "Hi Sweetheart. (back to David) "David, please try to remember that we need to be positive role-models for our son." (he smirks) "There are no "oggling lessons" allowed. Is that clear?!"
David: "Yes, dear." (he smirks - stands up and kisses her)
(She smiles back. She knows he was just having some fun. Not the kind of fun that she'd prefer, but that's the man she fell in love with.)
Maddie: "Daniel is staying with me today. Just buzz me if you need me."
David: "I allready did - last night."
Maddie: "David." (she blushes) He always knows what to say to get to her. "We'll be in my office. I'll work half the day, and take him home at lunch."
David: "Okee dokey. Bye son." (kisses him on the head - gives Maddie another kiss) "I'll see you tonight. We'll throw the football around after dinner." (waves as Maddie walks out - Daniel gets a big smile on his face and waves back to daddy.) cut to: ? Ok, this just kind of took on a life of it's own when I was typing it. It's not great, but just a "what if".  ~blue moon girl |
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Post by Stephanie on Aug 16, 2005 3:34:30 GMT -5
lol! That's GREAT!  I can already see it in my head haha! |
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Post by Sakura on Aug 16, 2005 5:28:01 GMT -5
Funny one bluemoongirl.
Since I am to young,I can imagine it very good,so easy to me.
How about you?
Sakura_Star1
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Post by Mulberry on Aug 16, 2005 7:20:52 GMT -5
I like it BlueMoonGirl, it's a really good story! I can see it in my head too!!
Mul
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Post by ryangie97 on Aug 16, 2005 13:47:45 GMT -5
ooh I like it bluemoon girl!! I can def. get a mental picture of it in my head as well. Great story.
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Post by rose35 on Aug 16, 2005 14:55:25 GMT -5
Hey great story so far. I've been dying to read some new fanfic!
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Post by bluemoongirl on Aug 16, 2005 18:46:24 GMT -5
Hi everyone! Thanks for the positive comments. I will try to write some more soon. I've been kinda swamped this week. But this particular scene just keep naggin' at me. I'm glad I finally put it out there. I've got some other fragments - small scenes - I'm contemplating that start right after "To Heiress Human". "Stay tuned....we now return you to your regularly scheduled program."  ~blue moon girl |
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Post by gypsygem81 on Sept 25, 2005 3:45:33 GMT -5
I don't know how I didn't read this when you first posted it! It's great bluemoongirl, I hope you're going to write some more!
Love Gem
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Post by bluemoongirl on Sept 25, 2005 10:20:49 GMT -5
Hey There Gem....thanks! ;D I've been distracted lately with 'work'. What's that about! But as soon as I'm inspired, I will definately post. |
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I can already see it in my head haha!
