snappysara
2nd Level
Spit and slide under
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Post by snappysara on Nov 18, 2011 11:57:08 GMT -5
Maddie outraged : I can't believe you just called me that!! Just after we kissed. Just before we were about to have dinner!! David: Called you what? Maddie: A (whispers) hussy. You can't just go around saying words like that to me and expect me to be ok with it. David (rolling his eyes) C'mon Maddie. I'm sorry. I just got carried away a bit. Lets stay and have dinner. He shoots her a sexy grin and she gives in. Maddie: Okaay but that is all. You have spoilt the mood. David: Well let's order a little CHAMPAGNE and see if we can't get that mood back a little. Waiter....
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Post by iluvdavid on Nov 18, 2011 16:55:12 GMT -5
Maddie: (sounding very annoyed) "and just like that with a little champagne you think you can put me in the MOOD again, Really David." David: (suddenly angry and disgusted) "You know what Maddie I am tired of always having to watch what I say, watch what I do around you or you get your satin panties in a bunch" he gets up from the table and throws his napkin down "panties that I might add that are much to much trouble to get off. Bye partner. See you Monday." Maddie is stunned as David walks out of the restaurant without a backwards glance.
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snappysara
2nd Level
Spit and slide under
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Post by snappysara on Nov 19, 2011 4:40:39 GMT -5
Maddie stares at the door, then at the menu, then at the door again. She goes to get up. David walks back in. She sits down quickly and pretends to peruse the menu.
David: Maddie, we need to go. Maddie: I'm not going anywhere with you! David: I've just seen something really weird.. Maddie: Look in a mirror did you? David: John and Charity are sitting in a car outside this restaurant engaged in some pretty serious lippus lockus and when I snuck over to investigate I saw Blake tied up on the back seat. Maddie: Whaaaaat? David : Exactly, Let's go. He grabs Maddies arm and she lets him drag her out of the restaurant. David (whispering in maddies ear with a SMIRK on his face) : nothing like a bit of lippus lockus to set the right mood.
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Post by iluvdavid on Nov 19, 2011 8:11:04 GMT -5
Maddie: "But what happened didn't Charity get arrested?" David (with a huge smirk on his face): "Gotcha!" Maddie pulls her arm free of David and pushes him. He laughs! "I never!" David: "Well maybe you should!" She pushes him again. He grabs her hand. " I had to get you out of the restaurant someway!." Maddie trying to hide he smile. 'Touche!" David: "Come on let's get home. It's past our BED time."
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Post by diane on Nov 19, 2011 22:56:12 GMT -5
It was a long ride to Maddie's house. David drove, and Maddie slumped in the passenger seat, each deep in thought. Occasionally, one or them would cast a glance in the other's direction, but quickly and furtively, not wanting to be caught.
Finally, the car pulls up in front of Maddie's house. They sit in silence for a few seconds, and then Maddie speaks.
Maddie: Well......
David: Deep, Hayes, deep.
Maddie: Want to come in......
David's eyes light up at the invitation. Maddie continues.
Maddie: .....for a cup of coffee?
David (sneering): You make lousy coffee.
Maddie: How about a drink?
David: That's a little better...at least it comes directly out of a bottle.
Maddie: Daaaaaavid.
David: Maddie, I don't want any liquid refreshment. I don't want to watch a movie. I don't want a bedtime snack. If those are all you are offering, I think we'd best say goodnight.
Maddie looks at him for a minute, then a sly smile creeps over her face.
Maddie: No snack? Not even a little one?
She leans over and kisses him. It is a kiss full of promise....quite long enough to convey her intentions.
Maddie: Figure it out, Einstein. You coming?
She exits the car and heads towards the door without a backwards glance.
David's eyes widen, he does a double take, and catapaults out the car door, hardly remembering to grab the keys. He catches up to Maddie, sliding his arm around her waist. She smiles at him, and waits patiently as he opens the door with her key. They enter, and close the door behind them.
After a few moments, the door opens again. David pops his head out.
David: Hey, you guys got a "Do Not Disturb" sign?
He pauses, then continues.
David: No matter....just get the hell out of here.
He starts to sing....."Ain't no woman like the one I got......." and pops his head back in....slamming the door behind him.
THE END (unless anybody has anything better!!)
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Post by finefinegoodgood on Nov 20, 2011 17:39:11 GMT -5
clapping...clapping....clapping. Wonderful! Great finish to a great write around!!! Good job gals!!! Take a bow.
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goldilocks
3rd Level
You know he is perfect for me...but you and me...we...we..
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Post by goldilocks on Nov 28, 2011 16:32:49 GMT -5
I didn't even know the story was finished! What a surprise! It was a very enjoyable reading girls!
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